For reading this week our goal was Visualise using all of the senses, and talk about how this enriches meaning I read a book about harry potter when he sees the great hall for the first time her is what I created.
Have you read Harry Potter?
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Lily, this is a great moment in the book. I would love to read what is in the text box of your drawing but I can't see it. Its a shame that there isn't text in your other speech bubbles. Remember to take your time to take your work to the next level and challenge yourself.
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