For reading this week we read a paragraph from Harry Potter we then had to take a moment from that paragraph and picture it in our minds. I choose the scene when Harry Potter And Hermine and Ron sore Hogwarts for the first time her is what I created.
Have you read Harry Potter?
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wednesday, 10 June 2020
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Good job Lily, yes I have read Harry Potter. JK Rowling is a great author, she lots of great imagery and description in her writing. Remember to proof read what you type.
ReplyDeleteWhat do you mean no mistakes :( ? ????????????????????????
ReplyDeleteThis looks fantastic Lily. The statements you have included are great and tell me what you were visualising when creating this image.
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