This is my fist blog. Hi welcome to world lily I love sport like athletes hockey. I have a family of 4 my big brother taylor my mum Felicity and my dad brendan love the fresh air bening outside is fun for me but all so like being inside playing ipad and watching tv I also like jojo siwa. My birthday is march 26 of march I love christmas it is my favorite time of year as well as my birthday I love the blues super rugby team I love the black sticks and the all blacks also the black caps . well thanks for reading my first blog. Peace out
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, 6 April 2018
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This is Amazing Lily , I loved how you described Yourself so well.
ReplyDeleteBut next time do It like im Writing this Comment. Also Please put full stops and Capital letters.
hi lily its holly your freind IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE DONE but still I cant wait to learn more WHEN YOU DO IT
ReplyDeleteI loved it lily it was a great but there is not much on it but it is really good.
ReplyDeletewow plz fix writing
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