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Friday, 6 April 2018


This  is my fist blog.  Hi welcome to world lily   I love sport like athletes hockey. I  have a family of 4 my big brother taylor my mum Felicity   and my dad brendan love the fresh air bening outside is fun for me but all so like being inside  playing ipad and watching tv I also like jojo siwa. My birthday is march 26 of march I love christmas it is my favorite  time of year as well as my birthday I love the blues super rugby team I love the black sticks and the all blacks also the black caps . well thanks for reading my first blog. Peace out

4 comments:

  1. This is Amazing Lily , I loved how you described Yourself so well.
    But next time do It like im Writing this Comment. Also Please put full stops and Capital letters.

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  2. hi lily its holly your freind IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE DONE but still I cant wait to learn more WHEN YOU DO IT

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  3. I loved it lily it was a great but there is not much on it but it is really good.

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  4. wow plz fix writing

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