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Thursday, 13 August 2020

Reading

For reading i read about why kids should not eat junk food  I made this viedo about it. I agree that kids should not  eat junk food.




1 comment:

  1. Some good points Lily. It would have been good if you could have added more specific detail to your ideas. Punctuation would have been good too!

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