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Thursday, 13 August 2020
Reading
For reading i read about why kids should not eat junk food I made this viedo about it. I agree that kids should not eat junk food.
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Some good points Lily. It would have been good if you could have added more specific detail to your ideas. Punctuation would have been good too!
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